Monday, March 8, 2010

a little dialogue exchange

So I wrote some dialogue for a contest I had heard about and then I found out that the contest has to feature certain categories and prompts and such so I have this short exchange and nothing to do with it. So here. You read it so I don't feel like I wasted time.

"Hey."

" 'Hey' "

...

"I'm sorry. I just...."

"Your okay sit down."

"Okay. Look I'm sorry about you and..."

"Clare?"

"Claire? Isn't that a girls name in New Zealand?"

"australia."

"Whatever. It's all the same to me... Don't laugh."

"Short for Clarence. Geeky name, I know."

"Yeah... ugh, I never should have come I'll go-"

"No please- I want you to stay. I'm not much for talking but I want somebody to talk to so..."

"'l'll stay."

"Thank you."

....

"Clare, he's a lier."

"What?"

"He was lying about all of his plans to finish collage and marry me. He had a girl friend back on campus."

"I'm sorry I didn't know. I-"

"Let me finish. I was so angry when I found out. I told him I never wanted to see him again and he could make a blasted hole in the ocean for all I care. and he.... well he did."

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I wonder if I should have caught it of here... It seems like there's more everytime I read it.

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