Friday, January 22, 2010

hello all you wonderful people of people town!

So hear is a poem I wrote back in 08' for school. It's not very good but I remember working hard on it so I just have to show it to you all. I was supposed to copy the rhyme and rhythm scheme of a famous poem that I liked. See if you can guess the poem I copied it of off. I doubt you'll be able to, the pure lameness of this poem will totally cancel out any association with the other poem.

Rain is falling on my face
dripping on my arms like lace.
Liquid jewels on the grass
puddles are a looking glass.


For the freedom of the wind
I do pine for days on end.
The inhuman songs of heather
played by the wind forever.


Thunder cracks the clouded sky
lightning flashes and then I
run for cover from the gale,
thund'ring hard as flint and nail.


From the safety of the hatch
I do watch the storm dispatch.
To a gentle thrumming rain
all the tempests anger slain.


Rain is falling on my face
resting on my arms like lace.
Liquid jewels on the grass
puddles are a looking glass.


TADAA!Okay, cheesyness! I kind of stuck in some words and phrases throughout the poem that totally didn't work but I needed it to rhyme! Oh well I can't be a genius at everything :P

zee poetess katelyn

1 comment:

  1. Wow, that's great! I wish I could write poems like that!! WOW.

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